You and your neighbours have noticed that the rubbish collection services where you live have recently been quite bad. Write a letter to your local council. In your letter, – explain what you have recently experienced – explain what the neighbours have recently experienced – ask what action will be taken to improve the service
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to draw your attention towards the poor rubbish
collection service in the residential area
of Toronto city where we live. We are facing problems due to
the excessive garbage
.
I am in the habit of going morning walks daily, but due to
the garbage
I am unable to do that. Yesterday, I saw the Add a comma
garbage,
rubbish
collectors come to pick up the garbage
. Even though we put general garbage
, recyclables and kitchen waste in different bins, they did not collect it properly.
The people in the neighbourhood do
not able to take a breath in the fresh air and the Change the verb
are
garbage
is scattered everywhere which creates a problem for everyone to walk. This
garbage
not only creates different diseases in the area
but also
the bad odour compels us to leave the area
immediately.
I want you to handle this
issue on a priority basis. Also
please warn the rubbish
collector to collect it on time. I recommend you to
give them proper dates and schedules to improve the Fix the infinitive
apply
rubbish
service in our area
. I would be very grateful to you.
I am looking forward to hearing back from you soon!
Yours Faithfully,
Sam.Submitted by kaurjagdeep2097 on
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coherence cohesion
Include more cohesive devices to improve flow between sentences.
task achievement
Clarify the experiences of neighbours with specific examples or details.
suitable writing tone
Check for any incomplete sentences and try to maintain a more formal tone throughout the letter.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing were appropriately used.
task achievement
The letter addressed all prompts: personal and neighbours' experiences, and a request for action.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.