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Some teachers agree that group studies are helpful to students whereas some teachers are it is good and students study alone. Where you think which one is good as per your opinion and justify it.

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Students are the tender buds of our generation.
Thus
, they should be nourished with care. Currently it is getting a concerned topic as some teachers talk in favour of
group
 studies while other prefers peers to be alone. I accord with the statement that yes
group
 studies are helpful and will discuss both pros and cons to support my view.
To begin
 with, students face immense pressure these days as they have to go through numerous subjects in school and interestingly they don't have interest in all of them too. So, in that case
group
 studies play a pivotal role in helping a student to clear their doubts. For an instance
study
 conducted by Cambridge university clearly depicts that school goers who spent more time in
group
 studies are little more innovative and clear in their doubts.
On the contrary
 of it, if a student prefers to
study
 alone.
Then
, they don't have any body to sort out their problem or to discuss critical topics.
Moreover
,
Group
 studies bring different people with enormous thoughts of their own, which is helpful for everyone.
In addition
 to
this
, as parents don't have enough time to give to their children or sometimes they are not familiar with their
study
 patterns. Nobody is there to help them or to guide them. In conclusion, the student should be provided with the freedom to choose either if they want to
study
 alone or in
group
 studies.
Furthermore parents
Accept comma addition
Furthermore, parents
 have a greater role to play, as they should keep strong vigilance over their child while they having
group
 studies.
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