Some environmentalists have advocated building wildlife sanctuaries to protect endangered species. Discuss the Advantages and disadvantages of doing this.

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Some nature lovers have suggested building living temple (wildlife reserve) to secure endangered species.
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for animals) to protect the animals.
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, we illustrate about the disadvantages of constructing these altars. The major advantage of developing survival shrine would be to provide a protection for wild animals.They will get their
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is taken from them due to human civilisation.
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, it can help massively in becoming a foundation for providing herbal medicines as there are many trees, plants, shrubs whose leaves have herbal properties which can only grow in wildlife reserves. Another positive impact is that it would help in protecting the environment from global warming due to afforestation.
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, recently the Telangana government has passed a bill to construct a wildlife reserve on the outskirts of the city which would provide shelter for wild animals from neighbouring States. The disadvantages of having a shelter
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for animals would be dedicating huge areas for creating sanctuaries.
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means that the Central Government has to provide the humongous amount of funds for researching appropriate places as well as for building the reserves.
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the authorities have to appoint to staff for maintenance of these sanctuaries and take care of animals which is an additional expense.
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, lately in Hyderabad the government was building a zoo, park, but the central government did not give sufficient funds so the work has been stopped from past 2 years. To conclude, There are many advantages like protection of the environment
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giving medicine and providing a
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to animals, whereas the concern is about the amount of funds needed to build and maintain them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • endangered species
  • biodiversity
  • ecological balance
  • eco-tourism
  • wildlife conservation
  • sanctuaries
  • habitats
  • ethical concerns
  • dependency
  • preservation
  • educational opportunities
  • economic benefits
  • isolation
  • intervention
  • overcrowded
  • finite resources
  • behavioral changes
  • conservation efforts
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