Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.  Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In our everyday
life
, it is almost impossible that always something pleasant things happen to us all the time.
However
, how those situations affect on someone’s
life
depends on almost
one
hundred percent of the
one
’s effort or a view of the
life
. If something influences in your
life
in an unpleasant
way
, there are two common responses to make things up that people usually do.
First
one
is accepting and bearing the situations and get along while another
one
is that putting some efforts to improve or try to
way
out.
Thus
, here, I would like to discuss about these two responses.
Firstly
, let’s discuss that agreeing with the situations,
such
as, someone has a stressful
job
with a low salary,
also
having aggressive authority. At the very
first
moment when it has been read, it is the
situation
almost impossible to get along.
However
, there might be a
situation
that thinking no
way
out rather accepting.
For instance
, when I am about to get retired, and my son attends college,
thus
I need
this
job
whatever it takes. In
this
case, even though the working condition and monthly is not sufficient, I still have mouths to feed,
in addition
, the age is too old to try something new, or lose the
job
.
Thus
, there is no other
way
to consider about changing or improving the current conditions. But, once you are young and healthy, it is always recommended to consider about escaping from the comfort zone. Another
way
to react to the situations, it is better to get stand your belief and dream.
For example
, even though your work is not providing you a sufficient budget in your
also
stressful at the same time, it means your
job
is sucking your energy, draining your motivation, eventually you will be ending up turning to the old
one
from the
first
case.
Thus
, it is better to seek ways out of the
situation
. Sometimes, it is common that not having enough self-esteem to get started or try something new, but it is better to start doing rather than stuck in the
situation
. In the end, accepting those bad situations might be the decision someone old due to their age and other critical financial situations.
However
, when you are young enough, it is always recommended that put some efforts to change the
situation
and move on happily before it gets too late.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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