In some countries, more and more people choose to live on their own. What are the reasons people choose to do this? Is it a positive or negative trend?

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Living alone can be an option for everyone throughout the world. What makes people a choice of living on their own depends on their mentality, thoughts and conditions. Whether it is a good choice or not, the number of individuals living alone has recently risen rapidly.

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living lonely can help build your personality traits

such

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as self-directed in a short term, development of

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phenomenon may have serious consequences both in individuals and societies in

long term

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the long term

. With regard to reasons, there have been several main ones.

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, sense of independence is bound to be the main motivator. It is rare to find a youth do not tend to show their ability to manage their life individually.

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, they have the benefits of being solitary

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flexible

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flex

time for study, work, having fun or even asleep.

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, splitting up can be the

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most contributing factor to explain why

this

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phenomenon are spreading.

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Especially

, those who had a painful divorce potentially have the most tendency to stay alone as they require time and a

cozy

enjoying or affording comforting warmth and shelter especially in a small space

cosy

place to switch off and relax. So, living alone can be the best choice for them.

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, most of the only child Students who are studying in abroad or in

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

city than their hometown are not able to stay in a residence hall, due to lack of sibling at home they were accustomed to be alone since they were a small child.

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, renting an apartment individually might be the best opportunity for them. The increasingly widespread of living lonely can be a negative development. For one thing, human beings are social creatures and they need a companion, roommate or mate, for another loneliness can make people psychologically ill, aggressive, arrogant and intolerable.

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, it seems to me that being independent and some emotional problems

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as family breakdown can be considered as the major contributor to live individually.

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