The system used for rubbish collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbors. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter ... 1. Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly 2. . Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours 3. Suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Sir/Madam,
A very good day to you all. I'm writing
this
letter to your esteemed counsel as a complaint of
the waste collection system Change preposition
about
that is
being applied in our neighborhood
. The approach that the municipality is adopting is not functioning the way it should.
Change the spelling
neighbourhood
First
and foremost, the timing of the collection is not suitable at all. The workers arrive at around 2:00 PM which is too late for the morning garbage and a bit early for the after lunch one. By that time the rubbish that had been taken out after breakfast would have spent more than 7 hours out in the open. Although
the waste bins provided by the city are large enough, they lack an essential feature, lids. Thus
, the rubbish is exposed to the elements for a time long enough to emit awful orders and attract all sorts of insects let alone a
stray dogs and cats which are a threat Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
in
their own to our kids and the health of the community. Change preposition
on
Furthermore
, our neighborhood
is well known for the beauty of the front yards of its villas come one feature that has been spoiled by the ugly, dirty and coverless garbage containers.
Because we know that the City Council cares as much as we Change the spelling
neighbourhood
, here
are some suggestions to bring back the elegance and the sanitation of our small community to how it used to be. Add a missing verb
do, here
First
, the containers should be replaced with new colorful
ones. 2nd the containers must be fitted with Change the spelling
colourful
built in
covers. 3rd garbage collection visits have to be more frequent; at least three times a day . Add a hyphen
built-in
Last
the visits must be timed well; once after breakfast, another after lunch and a third
after dinner or before midnight.
thanks a million for your cooperation and understanding!
Yours faithfully,Submitted by Ahmed Sami on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
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