Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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is common at the present time to see people getting updates on the latest news from the internet rather than the traditional method of reading a
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. I would argue that electronic sources of news will gradually replace that of the
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. Newspapers remain an important source of news for several reasons. The
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of these is that the older generation still prefer to read their news
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way, which is because they have traditionally bought a
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over the years and so do not wish to change or simply do not know how to do so online in some cases.
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comes with other supplements,
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as magazines and television guides, and sources of entertainment,
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makes it more attractive for some than going online.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reliable
  • credible
  • focused
  • immersive
  • tangibility
  • tradition
  • access
  • digital devices
  • demographics
  • older generation
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