Human activity has damaged the environment all around the world. Some people think that humans cannot stop damaging the planet whereas other believe that we can alter our behavior and prevent future damage. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

From the perspective of some people, it is believed that all of environmental calamities damaged the planet can be arisen by human affairs. Yet, others think that by adjusting people’s

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

, we can protect the

environment

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from disasters which may take place in the future. In my opinion, for saving the

environment

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, people should alter their conduct. On the one hand, some problems connected with the

environment

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are uncontrollable.

For instance

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growing number

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a growing number

of people- overpopulation has

great impact

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a great impact

to

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of

the environmental disasters. Because it is clear that breeding is not banned, and

thus

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, now one family may possess more than 3children. After that, there will be

necessity

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necessary

for catering them with shelters. Certainly, nowadays in order to provide

increased population

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the increased population

with land, large scale of forest trees is being cut and converting into towns and

farm lands

a rural area where farming is practiced

farmlands

, leading to

loses

something that is lost

loss

losses

of forests.

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of

this

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there will be

decreasement

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in rainfall and damage

for

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to

the planet.

On the other hand

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, if there is an adjustment of the people’s

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

, we can protect the

environment

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from calamities and I agree. For obtaining

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result,

first

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of all, children should be taught to go green and be economically-friendly from their early age by teachers and parents. Not only

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, but

also

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to tackle with

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issue, the government

have

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has

to legislate new rules. To take an example, since at the current

time everywhere

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time, everywhere

is covered with the pandemic, there is a rule for sitting at home during quarantine days.

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kind of rules can help people to contribute together and pay attention to the circumstances of the

environment

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more deeply. To sum up, as some environmental disasters do not depend on people and are uncontrollable, people may not stop them.

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, I speculate that they have to try as much as possible for prevention.