Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about computer courses that really interests you, but it is only for people who completed elementary course. write a letter to the college enrollment officer. In your letter, explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course

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Dear sir, I am writing

this

letter to inquire about the computer course that was published in yesterday's newspaper. I am Himanshu, and I have been working as a CNC machinist with Lee Valley

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However

, I have a keen interest in learning different computer skills. As a machinist, I basically deal with the machines and help my team with production. But, my ultimate career goal is to become a CNC programmer that requires a vast knowledge of computers. Yesterday, I was reading the 'Times of India' newspaper and I saw your advert about the Mastercam program. Suddenly, I got really excited and I thought

this

would be really helpful to pursue my career goal. I have a basic knowledge of drawing and drafting software.

In addition

, I provide customers with a 'Bill of materials' which requires extensive knowledge about computers.

Although

the course you are offering has a pre-requirement of 'design and modelling' course, I am wondering if any exception can be allowed as I have experience in using various software, so I can register myself. I am looking forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Himanshu

Submitted by Himanshu Chaudhari on Sun Jul 19 2020

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