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Dogs are one of the most popular pets in the world, Yet many would argue that their buildup is inappropriate .Do you agree or disagree?

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Dogs are the mans best friends
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there is no other animal that equals the dogs loyalty and service to the humans.
However
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when we consider the
cannie
small and light boat; pointed at both ends; propelled with a paddle
canoe
canine
cone
 as a pet and breed it for our
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
 we should do full justice to it
.
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We need to groom them and train them and be mindful of their health and welfare.
However
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I do not support the build of stray dogs in the streets
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The stray dogs pose a
mences
something that is a source of danger
menace
 to the general
public they
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public, they
 might attack young children on the street and howl through the night disturbing the neighbourhood.
This
 does not go
for dogs those
Suggestion
for those dogs
 that are trained as pets these mute creatures do not spare anything to please their masters.There have been several stories published how dogs have
rescured
delivered from danger
rescued
 the humans at the stake of their own life.Many dogs help the blind and guide them to overcome their disability
infact they
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infected, they
infected they
in fact they
infarct they
 become the eyes of the blind. Dogs
also
 aid and assist the law enforcement agencies to sniff out drugs and
aprehend
get the meaning of something
apprehend
apprehends
 criminals. To recapitulate is might be said that dogs as a pet a not a threat or
inappropriate but
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inappropriate, but
 build up of stray dogs should be monitored and curtailed by the responsible authorities.
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