‘The two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present day. Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.’

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The maps depict the

town

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town's

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development from 1986 until

present

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the present

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Overall

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it is clear that

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the township underwent enormous modernization and

are

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rented by people who retire from

the

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apply

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government services.

Also

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, the post office and the bridge remain the same throughout the years. The town is divided by a river

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the centre . On the left side, the place used to be

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apply

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farmland

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but was soon replaced

into

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a block of houses. In the northernmost part, some part of the residence

taken

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took

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over

the

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by the

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shops around the area.

Meanwhile

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,Meanwhile

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the changes

occur

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that occur

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on the right side

appears

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appear

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to be quite significant. The retirement

house

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was converted into a huge

house

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with

the

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garden in front of the

house

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. It is seen that some

house

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are

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constructed near the river bank usually on the lower parts

while

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at the upper part, the

house

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extends from the river horizontally and soon cover the farmlands which used to be settled.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words house with synonyms.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

160 words

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