Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discus both views.
Animals are
also
an essential part of our ecosystem, saving their lives is becoming a major concern. It is asserted by few that animals should not be kept in zoo
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a zoo
the zoo
zoos
,
while others believe that zoos are necessary for entertainment purpose as well as for maintaining Accept space
,
ecology
. Both the views are discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.
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ecological
To begin
with, people strongly argues
that animals should not be Suggestion
strongly argue
caved
in zoos because these made for or formed by carving
carved
zoo
are not for saving Suggestion
zoos
wildlife but
for creating income for Accept comma addition
wildlife, but
zoo
keepers as these animals are kept for public viewing .
Accept space
.
Although
it is unethical to keep these animals locked ,
yet Accept space
,
zoo
keepers exhibit animals for profit making. For instance
, Tigers from the forests are caught by zoo
keepers and kept in zoos .
Accept space
.
people
from different parts visit to watch tigers for which they have to pay, thereby leading to increase in dirty-dealings. Suggestion
People
Moreover
, animals love to live and move freely in the natural habitat, whereas these wildlife
parks create artificial habitat, alter these animals by providing them food and caged .
Accept space
.
where
these animals are not even allowed to find their prey.
Suggestion
Where
On the other hand
, wildlife
parks are suitable place for entertainment, fun and education as well. A lot of theoretical knowledge is provided to
pupils related to animals, while kids know very less about animals practically. Visiting and viewing animals in the Suggestion
with
zoo
one can gain immense knowledge by observing them closely. For example
, a survey conducted by an educational bopard
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board
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pads
,
it is revealed that more than 75% of the students gain more knowledge when they view things practically rather than memorizing what is taught. Yet another point is that zoos are important for Accept space
,
mainting
ecological balance by saving animals becoming extinct from their predators.
To summarize, keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"
maintaining
although
wildlife
park helps saving animals from becoming extinct as
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