Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discus both views.

Animals are
also
an essential part of our ecosystem, saving their lives is becoming a major concern. It is asserted by few that animals should not be kept in
zoo
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a zoo
the zoo
zoos
,
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while others believe that zoos are necessary for entertainment purpose as well as for maintaining
ecology
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ecological
. Both the views are discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin
with, people
strongly argues
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strongly argue
that animals should not be
caved
made for or formed by carving
carved
in zoos because these
zoo
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zoos
are not for saving
wildlife but
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wildlife, but
for creating income for
zoo
keepers as these animals are kept for public viewing
.
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.
Although
it is unethical to keep these animals locked
,
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,
yet
zoo
keepers exhibit animals for profit making.
For instance
, Tigers from the forests are caught by
zoo
keepers and kept in zoos
.
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.
people
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People
from different parts visit to watch tigers for which they have to pay, thereby leading to increase in dirty-dealings.
Moreover
, animals love to live and move freely in the natural habitat, whereas these
wildlife
parks create artificial habitat, alter these animals by providing them food and caged
.
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.
where
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Where
these animals are not even allowed to find their prey.
On the other hand
,
wildlife
parks are suitable place for entertainment, fun and education as well. A lot of theoretical knowledge is provided
to
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with
pupils related to animals, while kids know very less about animals practically. Visiting and viewing animals in the
zoo
one can gain immense knowledge by observing them closely.
For example
, a survey conducted by an educational
bopard
a committee having supervisory powers
board
of Madhya
pardesh
a composition that imitates or misrepresents somebody's style, usually in a humorous way
parodies
pads
,
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it is revealed that more than 75% of the students gain more knowledge when they view things practically rather than memorizing what is taught. Yet another point is that zoos are important for
mainting
keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"
maintaining
ecological balance by saving animals becoming extinct from their predators. To summarize,
although
wildlife
park helps saving animals from becoming extinct
as
(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')
well
wll as
are so
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sources
urce of education and
f
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un ,yet these zoos takes away the freedom of them by keeping them caged in order to obtain income
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