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Some governments spend a lot of public money training individuals to be successful in international sporting events. Some people believe that this money should be spent on things that will benefit the general public instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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NOWADAYS SPORTSMEN AND SPORTSWOMEN IS PLAYING AN ESSENTIAL ROLE IN THE MODERN SOCIETY AND IN THE WORLD.
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 OUR GOVERNMENT IS
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 SPENDING
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A MAXIMUM PART
 OF OURTAXES IN THE INTERNATIONAL AND NATIONAL SPORTS SYSTEM.THROUGHOUT HUMAN HISTORY GAMES ARE BEST SOURCE OF ENTERTAINMENT TO EVERYONE AND THE SOURCE OF PRIDE FOR THE NATION TOO.
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 SOME PEOPLE ARE IN FAVOUR OF THESE TRENDS AND EVENTS, OTHERS
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 MYSELF INCLUDES THINKS THE CONTRAWISE.
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CONFLICTING VIEWS REGARDING THE MERITS AND DEMERITS OF
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 MOVEMENT LEADS VARIOUS QUESTIONS IN GENERAL PUBLIC.
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GOVERNMENT
 SHOULD NOT SPEND THE CAPITAL AMOUNT FOR THESE EVENTS
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 THEY SHOULD WORK TO IMPROVE THE INFRASTRUCTURE OF THE COUNTRY
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 DEVELOPMENT OF POOR AREAS
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GROWING INDUSTRIES TO AVOID THE UNEMPLOYMENT FOR THE YOUTH. MAXIMUM PART SHOULD BE INVESTED IN INDUSTRIES
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EDUCATION AND ECONOMY OF THE NATION TO COPE UP WITH THE ADVANCEMENT OF THE WORLD.THE NATIONAL WEALTH SHOULD BE USE WISELY TO PROTECT THE GENERATIONS FROM HARDSHIPS AND THE UNEMPLOYMENT. IN MY VIEW THE COUNTRY WITH POOR INFRASTRUCTURE AND HIGH EMPLOYMENT RATE CAN NOT PROVIDE THE YOUTH WITH GLORY AND SUCESS. AUTHORITIES RESPOSIBLE FOR THE SPORTS AND EVENTS SHOULD SEARCH POWERFUL SPONSORS AND ENTERPRENEURS RATHER THAN USING A PUBLIC MONEY. AT THE END I WOULD LIKE TO EPRESS THAT
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GOVERMENT
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GOVERNMENT
 CAN NOT LOOSE TALENTED SPORTSMEN AND SPORTSWOMEN THAT ARE OUR ASSETS.BUT THEY HAVE TO INTRODUCE A COMMETTEE AND CLUBS TO BE RESPONSIBLE FOR THESE UNDER A CERTAIN BUDGET. WITH THE ACKNOWLEDGEMENT OF THEIR TRAININGS AND LEARNINGS
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 THAT ARE VERY IMPORTANT AND COSTLY.
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