Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Rewarding the students who show their good perform in the
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is better than punishing them. In my opinion, I totally agree with Use synonyms
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There are several reasons why I admit that giving appreciation is better than punishment in the Linking Words
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and foremost, the teacher no need to educate them by force through a kind of sanctions. Due to the most human, especially the students who prefer to get good things Linking Words
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, the recognition from their teacher could motivate them to do more and Linking Words
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would affect to the improvement of the student's grade that could be higher than their previous grade.
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, punishing the children would influence to their behaviour and future lives. Linking Words
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, later, they could not be confident to do anything at a Linking Words
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kind of students would not be motivated to have social skill in the future, including getting a job.
By way of conclusion, I restate that reward is better than punished for children, which will improve their many performances and grades at the Linking Words
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