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Nowadays, people always throw old things away and buy new things, whereas in the past, old things were repaired and used again. What factors cause this phenomenon? What effects does the phenomenon lead do?

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In today's world, replacement is the most commonly used words all over. Usage of things varies between people and their generation gap.
Moreover
, options are easily available and profoundly accepted by the societies.
This
 act of replacement and buying new products or objects had induced changing mentality between individuals.
To begin
 with, the booming attraction of technology, indulged ever lasting impact on people to crave for more and more latest version products and so
this
 process had become vice versa.
For instance
, mobile phones are constantly updated with new software version.
This
 made people do go for recent models of mobile phones and the market is always in peak.
Secondly
, the acceptance of modernized people to older products is hardly noticeable in many sectors.
Furthermore
, if people still hold on to old age products, they are probably seen as a museum and historic objects to be just known. On the flip side, there are many families and societies which emphasize on the facts and benefits of historic things or objects. While half of the population purchase things for mere regular usage, these kind of people overlooks and protect those things as a treasure.
Besides
 these facts, in those days people were so adaptable to the environment and minimal
usage
Suggestion
use
 of resources were noticed and leaving behind for the upcoming generations.
This
 habitual process had let them to reuse the products for later use rather than diminishing the resources. To recapitulate, it is of utmost necessary for the current society to be taught with the concept of "reduce, reuse and recycle" for the remaining things and resources to be saved for upcoming youngsters. By following
such
 practices, plethora of environmental issues
such
 as pollution, spoilage of water bodies which in turn causes health effects, can be reduced to a maximum rate. Go green with available resources.
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