Some people say that Government should break down all the historic building and replace them with modern buildings. Do you agree or disagree?

Historic buildings are symbols of every

nations

Suggestion

nation's

history. I keep totally an opposite plan toward any idea advocating destroying these buildings. Each monument around the world has been made in

Suggestion

specific

era

a particular geographical region of indefinite boundary (usually serving some special purpose or distinguished by its people or culture or geography)

area

and it symbolizes the art,

architucre

an architectural product or work

architecture

spritual

concerned with sacred matters or religion or the church

spiritual

aspects of people at that period of time. These

structure

Suggestion

structures

illustrate which path that nation has taken to reach

this

place.

Suggestion

the other hand, by studying these structure,

schalors

a learned person (especially in the humanities); someone who by long study has gained mastery in one or more disciplines

scholars

scales

schools

have

percieved

detected by instinct or inference rather than by recognized perceptual cues

perceived

many knowledge about our ancestors.

knowing

Suggestion

Knowing

those people and studying

there

of them or themselves

their

attitudes had lead us to become aware of their victories and defeats.

Furthuremore

in addition

Furthermore

, beside every

aformentioned

being the one previously mentioned or spoken of

aforementioned

signidicance

the quality of being significant

significance

, some of these buildings are truly beautiful to

eyes

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the eyes

. They make the

city's

Suggestion

city

view attractive.

Additionally

, monuments are crucial to every

countries

Suggestion

country's

tourism, as some countries

such

as Iran has almost nothing to offer to the tourists but it's history.

Therefore their

Accept comma addition

Therefore, their

importance of

nation's economy

Suggestion

the nation's economy

a nation's economy

is undeniable.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

216 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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invaluable assets
tangible connection
architectural heritage
modernization
energy efficiency
adaptive reuse
historical significance
economic implications
sustainable
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