Some people say that Government should break down all the historic building and replace them with modern buildings. Do you agree or disagree?

Historic buildings are symbols of every
nations
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nation's
history. I keep totally an opposite plan toward any idea advocating destroying these buildings. Each monument around the world has been made in
an
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a
specific
era
a particular geographical region of indefinite boundary (usually serving some special purpose or distinguished by its people or culture or geography)
area
and it symbolizes the art,
architucre
an architectural product or work
architecture
,
spritual
concerned with sacred matters or religion or the church
spiritual
aspects of people at that period of time. These
structure
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structures
illustrate which path that nation has taken to reach
this
place.
on
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On
the other hand, by studying these structure,
schalors
a learned person (especially in the humanities); someone who by long study has gained mastery in one or more disciplines
scholars
scales
schools
have
percieved
detected by instinct or inference rather than by recognized perceptual cues
perceived
many knowledge about our ancestors.
knowing
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Knowing
those people and studying
there
of them or themselves
their
attitudes had lead us to become aware of their victories and defeats.
Furthuremore
in addition
Furthermore
, beside every
aformentioned
being the one previously mentioned or spoken of
aforementioned
signidicance
the quality of being significant
significance
, some of these buildings are truly beautiful to
eyes
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the eyes
. They make the
city's
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city
view attractive.
Additionally
, monuments are crucial to every
countries
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country's
tourism, as some countries
such
as Iran has almost nothing to offer to the tourists but it's history.
Therefore their
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Therefore, their
importance of
nation's economy
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the nation's economy
a nation's economy
is undeniable.
More questionable issue
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The more questionable issue
is that what is the
offense
a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others
offence
to just let these structures to be as they are. Modern buildings can be structured in any other place. As a conclusion, I believe that not only these monuments should be kept in place, but should be restored if needed. They don't cause any harm to the modern view of cities, modernity can be achieved by many other innovations.
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  • invaluable assets
  • tangible connection
  • architectural heritage
  • modernization
  • energy efficiency
  • adaptive reuse
  • historical significance
  • economic implications
  • sustainable
  • green technologies
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