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Some believe technology has made our lives too complex and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology. To what extent you agree or disagree

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While many opine that technological inventions have done more harm than good, inevitably making
life
 more complex, whereas in order to lead
life
 to the fullest we ought to simplify it by ceasing
technology
 use..
however in
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However, in
However in
 my opinion, despite some shortcomings, moving away from existing
technology
 is seemingly impractical. Do you control your phone or does your phone controls you? One of the most compelling reasons that
technology
 has made
life
 complicated today is rendering people perpetually available as it truly runs our lives.
for
Suggestion
For
 instance, In the past, a worker might work nine to five
then
 come home, have dinner, spend time with family, and enjoy a private
life
.
However
,
this
 simply is no longer the case. While one works ends, you are still
pulled
Suggestion
pulling
 back by email notifications and phone calls from the manager or coworkers which lead to complicated lifestyle.
Therefleads
 if a sustainable balance is not achieved between work and personal
life
,
technology
 can be counterproductive. What will one do if
technology
Suggestion
the technology
 is unplugged?
although
Suggestion
Although
life
 has become more complicated and
this
 is a negative development, shutting yourself off from
technology
 would only serve to isolate people from the word, no Netflix to watch, no games to play, nobody to text, and nothing to scroll through.
a
Suggestion
A
 study revealed, quitting from technological inventions contributed to anxiety, loneliness, and a sense of inadequacy.
hence
(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
Hence
, with
soo
to a very great extent or degree
so
 much important information in
this
 little technological boxes, it seems definitely unrealistic shutting them. In conclusion,
although
technology
 has hurt people, turning away from it is not feasible today without making drastic sacrifices.
Instead
, people ought to seek ways to compartmentalize
technology
 in order to live happier, more satisfying lives
Submitted by Hassan Nnasir on

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