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Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. /To extent what Do you agree or disagree?

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It is a hotly debated issue under consideration that famous people affect children in a negative way through the media. While I agree that the negative sides of
this
 issue, I believe that media may have beneficial impressions on children by appropriately using. Regarding the positive sites, should celebrities choose from a scientific world, sportive or inspiring and creative people, it will likely affect children's behaviour.
In other words
, they tread in these people's footsteps and so want to achieve success in sport, literature, science or art.
For example
, in my country, Aziz Sancar who is the molecular biologist scientist earns the Nobel Prize in Chemistry five years ago. Today with the media power, not just children almost everyone knows him. He has been evoked admiration with both his scientific achievement and
also
 life's experiences. In media news, some children who want to be like him
that is
 have been witnessed.
This
 may have a critical role in children's career aspirations and possible to make a way for children to think more creatively.
On the other hand
, the argument given above can be considered from the opposite angle. In media news, children might have been exposed to notorious people and possibly may emulate them. That the drug, excessive rate of alcohol consumption or a quarrelsome personality
have received
Suggestion
has received
 more attention today media rather than people who success in professional area.
Furthermore
, children have not enough ability to evaluate which news
are effecting
Suggestion
is affecting
are affecting
 their psychology badly. And all detrimental behaviours may cause permanent damage in their personality. In conclusion, I believe that
in addition
 to their bad harm to children, I think that it can be guide should media is used properly.
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