Many believe that success in life mainly depends on hard work and determination while others believe that factors like money and personal appearance are important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is believed that prosperity during lifetime is predominantly based on intensive work and persistence, whereas
opposers
feel that external circumstances like finances and physical beauty are crucial. I side with the one who estimates officially the worth or value or quality of things
appraisers
first
view, in as
much as it gives motivation to take action.
The primary reason why some people consider that welfare and superiority in appearance are Suggestion
view, as
main factors
that lead to Suggestion
the main factors
success
stems from opportunities provided by them. This
is because money enables people to have confidence in achieving their goals. For example
, people with big bank accounts can afford studing
in famous universities around the world. Suggestion
to study
studying
In addition
, they can easily start a business and succeed in the future.
Nevertheless
, I support those those who believe that working hard and decisiveness play the biggest role in achieving success
. The reason for this
is that these values provide people with motivation and enthusiasm. As a consequence, they will make an effort to improve not only financial position, but all areas and these actions will definitely lead them to be happy. For instance
, young student, who was nurtured in poor conditions, will work a lot in order to study in tertiary institution
, get a good job with high revenue and be Suggestion
tertiary institutions
a tertiary institution
successful family man
in his later life.
In conclusion, even though some might argue that Suggestion
a successful family man
success
can be gained by finances and charm, others, including myself, are sure that values such
as diligence and purposefulness will rote
to that. I would recommend people to work intensively and be ambitious since they would be motivated to achieve an established line of travel or access
route
success
.Submitted by Абдулла Губайдуллин on
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