Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discuss both views.

Nowadays, keeping animals in zoo’s has become a debatable topic among the society. Few sections of society believe that keeping animals in zoological park leads them to forget their natural habitat;
however others
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however, others
argue that zoos are important for entertaining purposes as well as ecologically.
This
essay will discuss both views in detail. The main disadvantage animals would face is that they could forget their natural habitat if kept in a cage.
This
is
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
they would get prepared food,
such
as meat and
vegetabels
edible seeds or roots or stems or leaves or bulbs or tubers or nonsweet fruits of any of numerous herbaceous plant
vegetables
, in the zoos by humans, which would lead them to give up their
haunting
the pursuit and killing or capture of wild animals regarded as a sport
hunting
skills.
For example
, in 2003, a zoo in India had been closed by the Government. The animal department failed to take care of animals due to lack of money and they had to send all the animals in the forest.
some
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Some
dogs hunted some lions because they did not know the surviving skills.
Therefore
, these captivated animals would no longer knows their habitation skills by living in a cage.
On the other hand
, if animals have some drawbacks in zoos whereas they would get some
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
as well.
On the other hand
, some sections of society believe that
internet
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the internet
leads to people
toward
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to
loneliness.
This
is because most of
people
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the people
considered more fun and comfortable to
intrect
act together or towards others or with others
interact
online with others, rather than going out to meet face to face
to
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with
people.
For instance
,
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,
recent studies show
,
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,
most of individuals around the world, spend their time while using
internet
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the internet
,
as a result
, their relation with families and as well as with
collegues
an associate that one works with
colleagues
are not strong anymore as
compaired
examine and note the similarities or differences of
compared
to
past
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the past
.
Thus
, the extra use of
internet
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the internet
, taking people away from socialization. To conclude,
although
,
internet
has some
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
to people, but it
also diconnect
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also disconnects
also disconnect
them with
real world
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the real world
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • captivity
  • natural habitat
  • artificial enclosures
  • genetic diversity
  • animal welfare
  • conservation efforts
  • endangered species
  • biodiversity
  • education platform
  • breeding programs
  • reintroduction
  • psychological suffering
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