Some people believe that universities should only accept students with the highest marks while others believe that some students with low marks should have an opportunity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed that only the smartest students should be educated in tertiary institutions, whereas
opposers
one who estimates officially the worth or value or quality of things
appraisers
feel that students, who are less
knowledgeble
highly educated; having extensive information or understanding
knowledgeable
, should
also
be given
chance
Suggestion
the chance
a chance
to study there. I side with the former view, in as much as they make great contributions and teaching process flows more productive. The primary reason why some people consider that learners with lower grades need to be taught as well stems from beliefs that they would
also
become necessary workers hereinafter.
This
is because, most of those who have low scores,
although
they are talented, were not properly educated
becase
for the reason that; on account of
because
of their family issues or financial position.
For example
, thousands of young people in India, who are quick-minded, are limited
with
Suggestion
to
schools and cannot get access to the universities merely because they have not money to pay for
studing
scatter or intersperse like dots or studs
studding
student
.
Nevertheless
, l
support
Suggestion
supports
those who believe that getting an education in tertiary institutions can be mastered by erudite students. The reason for
this
is that they pass exams with high marks and
therefore
the average score of institutions is extremely increased. As a
concequence
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
consequence
,
this
factor helps universities be prestigious.
For instance
, lots of outstanding educational institutions around the world,
such
as the Oxford University, accept only
restricted number
Suggestion
a restricted number
of students who are really
knoeledgeable
highly educated; having extensive information or understanding
knowledgeable
. In conclusion, even though some might argue that tertiary education should be
availlable
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
for everyone, others, including myself, believe that only the cleverest ones can study in universities. I would recommend people to enlarge their knowledge before attempting to enter to institutions.
Submitted by Абдулла Губайдуллин on

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