You recently read an article in newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. Use following points: What is the article about? What is the error? What you expect an editor to do?

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Hello sir/madam, My name is Jay Patel, I read you all
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article
Fix the agreement mistake
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published on the blog. I am writing
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letter in regards
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your recent
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published on 25th July , about our prime minister
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Modi. Your
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was written perfectly, but I found some wrong information in that
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.
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of all, you mentioned in that
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about our prime minister earlier life, but
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a different story. You write that he was working as a cashier in his childhood, but the write thing is that he was working as a servant at the tea stall in his village. I would appreciate that if you can change that information from that
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and published it again. I hope you will work on that, Yours Sincerely, Jay Patel.
Submitted by Jay Patel on

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • newspaper
  • article
  • error
  • inaccurate
  • information
  • editor
  • corrections
  • evidence
  • rectify
  • accurate
  • reporting
  • future
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