For the majority of countries, primary and secondary schools close for two months or even longer during the
summer
Use synonyms
holidays
. I'll explain that there are huge benefits to resting longer during the Use synonyms
holidays
. Use synonyms
Also
, there are some arguments in favour of shortening the number of days.
First of all, I agree with the statement that young Linking Words
students
and adults should rest during the Use synonyms
summer
break. Because Use synonyms
students
tend to get sick in the winter Use synonyms
due to
the cold. So, giving them a longer break has advantagesLinking Words
:
it replenishes their energy and supports their immune health. Punctuation problem
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For instance
, Linking Words
students
often catch a cold because of the harsh winter. Use synonyms
Thus
, parents rest in the countryside with their children to elevate their children's height and boost their immunity during the Linking Words
summer
break.
Second of all, teenagers like the idea of working as part-timers, usually at ages 15-18. Use synonyms
Moreover
, they can feel how hard it is to earn money. So, longer Linking Words
holidays
give them Use synonyms
time
to work, similar to their parents, and grow their knowledge of finances, even in a small amount of Use synonyms
time
. Use synonyms
Also
, they can spend their earned money on something efficient.
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On the other hand
, giving shorter school Linking Words
holidays
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also
has some advantages. Some Linking Words
students
often forget their hard-earned knowledge in a short Use synonyms
time
. So, they need to review their lessons as soon as possible. Another aspect is that they spend their precious Use synonyms
time
on unnecessary things, Use synonyms
such
as watching K-dramas and playing games. They are usually like owls, who do not sleep at night. Linking Words
Furthermore
, their sleep schedules are disrupted by online platforms. So, it is better to reduce the Linking Words
summer
holiday.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
students
enhance their immune function by resting in the countryside in the Use synonyms
summer
. Because they get sick in the winter. Use synonyms
In addition
, it is a better opportunity to work as a part-timer to learn the value of money. Linking Words
In contrast
, some children spend their Linking Words
time
playing games and disrupt their sleep. So, some people argued that the Use synonyms
summer
break should be shorter than now.Use synonyms