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Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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 contemporary world, there are a lot of legal issues regarding a miscarriage. Especially, a great deal of people follows their religion principles in terms of an
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. It is argued by the Millenials that abortions should be legal, while the old age people air that it must be illegal. In
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 essay, I am going to describe both perceptions, and will state my opinion at the end of the topic. On the
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 hand, few people backs
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. They believe that it is the choice of two individuals to have a kid or not. Because sometimes unprotected sex can
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 lead to pregnancy. According to them, lots of aspects like health conditions, financial status, and love for kids should be considered to give birth to a child if not
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 cannot maintain a kid.
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,
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 of my friends got aborted because there were not financially strong to take care of a child. In the light of these reasons, they think abortions should be legitimate.
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, baby boomers who are spiritual and orthodox disagree with the concept of
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. They believe that everyone is born for a reason, and no
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 has enough right to kill an embryo.
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, they think that God is final authoritarian to decide the life and death of a human.
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, my Mom does not corroborate the idea of killing a baby in the womb. They preach that legal framework should be as per the religion, customs, principles and law. In conclusion, it depends upon the individual to go ahead or not as per their country law with respect to
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. In my opinion, I strongly believe abortions should not be legal because everybody has right to live in
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 world including embryo in the mother's womb.
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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