It seems clear that obesity in today’s society is to some extent due to the availability of fast food. Should governments place a tax on fast food to reduce the amount of fast food consumed?

Obesity has become a common problem in western societies and

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is partly due to the availability of fast

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at low prices. To tackle

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problem, it has been suggested that governments should increase the tax on fast foods in order to reduce the amount of pre-cooked meals consumed. I personally believe that

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is a sound idea, because especially young people, who have less money, will be discouraged from buying

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at quick service restaurants. The main reason for the high consumption of junk

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is that it is a cheap alternative to healthy meals. A

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twice as expensive as a burger, resulting in more people eating the burger than the salad.

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, people prepare fewer meals themselves and eat more mass-produced

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. In my opinion, it should not be possible to sell fast

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at a lower price than staple

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. By making takeaway meals more expensive than vegetables and fruit, people would change their eating habits, as they would want to save money. Another way to reduce consumption of fast

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would be to prohibit its promotion. A similar approach was taken in terms of advertising cigarettes and one can say that

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approach has been successful to some extent.

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, commercials for fast

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often target young children through offering inducements,

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as the toys in the happy meal at McDonalds

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. The children are persuaded to demand a happy meal, yet often do not necessarily want to eat the

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contained in it. The only thing they want is the toy. If advertising junk

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were forbidden, the

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of children consuming pre-cooked meals would be reduced and

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the

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of obese children would decrease as well. In conclusion, governments should put a tax on fast

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to reduce the amount consumed in order to decrease the

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of obese people. By placing a tax on fast

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and making it more expensive than healthy raw foods, people

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to eat more healthily. If

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the advertising of quick service restaurants were banned, the

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of obese people would decrease even more drastically.