Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement. Give the reason and relevant examples.

Sports event

are played

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is played

all over the world and popular in almost every country. Sports are mainly associated with health and enjoyment, but there are many sports which are dangerous. Many people believe that

such

sports should be banned while others disagree with it. I strongly believe that unsafe sports need to be prohibited in each country to ensure safety. The most compelling argument to endorse the opinion of those who consider that dangerous sports should be banned on international level is beneficial to save human lives.

Although

people believe that threatening games like boxing, wrestling, rafting, bull fighting;

car

racing and so on should be prohibited as there are myriad risks associated with it.

For example

, sport like

car

racing, where the drivers drive the

car

at a very high speed and there are high changes of accident. In many instances

car goes

goods carried by a large vehicle

cargoes

and hits the stand, hurting not only the driver, but

also

many people sitting in the stands. Many people die in

such

accidents and many others get serious injuries. In

such

cases, it is a huge loss to

person’s

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people’s

families who die in

such

accidents and many have to live

rest

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the rest

of their life with the permanent disability.

Therefore

, the government needs to prohibit

such

hazardous sports that allow civilian to put there and other life at risk just for some money and entertainment.

Moreover

, many dangerous sports are playing

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international level.

For instance

, Kickboxing and wrestling is

national sport

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the national sport

of Thailand and many

participant

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participants

get serious injuries performing it. Banning

such

sports can hurt sentiments of those countrymen. So, it is very important to carefully go through

merits

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the merits

and demerits of

such

dangerous sports before taking any decision. To sum up, I would strongly recommend that dangerous sports should be banned on international level. Because they do not contribute to the development of human life and because of the dangers people could face, safer sports should be considered as the best alternative.

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