At present, the media affects people’s lives significantly. What impact does this have on society? Is it a negative or positive development?

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It is argued that, the news sources’ have left their strong impact on the humanity. At the current time every person is reading the newspaper and watching television news regularly

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, It is not beneficial for human being. Because, based on

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published information the man and women make their opinion of the world. Today’s, the digital media and other source of the media’s like newspaper, T.V news, internet, e-paper, etc. It is playing an important role in the human’s lifestyle. In the society every morning the man and women are showing or reading the news and by

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information, they are getting knowledge about the political views, local area activities, educational data, entertainment, etc.

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, by the public survey of the Communication department of Gujarat in 2019, 75 % people had accepted, that the media have a very useful role to passed information and aware normal citizens for currently running situation.

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, the media is not always good for the human being. The reason for

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, by that medium, some data is inconvenience and inaccurate. At the current time, the majority member’s of the society’s blindly trusted on

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news and based on that, they will create their views for some companies, politicians, celebrities, famous person, etc. As the result, sometime the media are wrongly influenced a society and

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not good for citizens.

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, at 2009, the wrong news published in a local newspaper about Aalen industries and the news is that, the industries had bankrupt.

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, investors have been worried after reading

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news and due to

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reason the shares rate of

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company’s has lowdown. In conclusion, the media is

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having a strong control on the person's life.

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, Based on the news medium data human is making their view of the planet. So, the media are having a negative impact on the community.

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