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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are few languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons…experience.

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Due to geographical separation, several languages are spoken around the globe. Some section of people
believe
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believes
 that with the existence of
limited languages
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the limited languages
, life will be simpler,
however
, others disagree. I opine on the fact that it is irrational to make certain languages go extinct year after year. It is important for all languages to sustain for various reasons. It can be said that languages are a matter of national and cultural heritage and they hold historical importance as well. Almost all the languages have been in existence for a number of years,
hence
, the present generation should be obliged to pass it on to their future generations. To illustrate, India is a multi-linguistic country where people speak languages native to their state.
Therefore
, it becomes important to bring to the knowledge of
future generation
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a future generation
 that how a particular
language
 has been in use as a means of daily communication since ancestral period.
Moreover
, extinction of languages would mean loss of career opportunities for people who are willing to be
language
 experts or translators. Students at universities undertake advanced
language
 programs to secure handsome salaried jobs in embassies and institutions abroad.
As a result
, lack of languages would mean less scope in
such
 jobs.
Furthermore
, dying of languages would gradually diminish the caste and culture of individuals who speak a particular
language
. I believe languages are a priceless possession and should be in continuous use by its people. To conclude, no
language
 should die out. People should be encouraged to make their
language whether
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language, whether
 national, local or mother tongue, an integral part of their lives and take measures to popularize it and spread its use among the communities
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