Creative artists should be given the freedom to express their ideas (through words, pictures, music, or films). However, some people think the government should impose certain restrictions on them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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With the contribution of the artists,

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has become

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an integral part of our lives that it is impossible to envision a world without it.

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, there are arguments for and against the freedom of artistic expression. From my perspectives, I completely agree that

art

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should be created at artists’ will.

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, it is undeniable that

art

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can better the current situation. Many societal issues have been well illustrated in many paintings, poems, song lyrics, and so on, due to the fact that

art

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is one of the most popular platforms that can affect strongly the mindset of the

audience

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, the majority of artists make use of their works to raise awareness of the social context.

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, the

audience

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will be more likely to take measures to address the existing problems. Take “We are the world”,

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song was composed by Michael Jackson to capture the attention of the tornado that seriously destroyed Haiti. If it had not been for his work, no financial and mental support for Haiti citizens would have been conducted.

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art

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is a powerful source of motivation for both the makers and the receivers. The more

liberty artists

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liberty, artists

gain to create what they want, the more satisfied they will be with their production. As satisfaction level rises, the

audience

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will feel more passion from the artists and be more supportive of idols’ hard work and love of creativity. In

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case,

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is a win-win situation, since both sides benefit greatly from

art

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: artists make qualified production to satisfy their fans. In conclusion, I believe that artists should be allowed to express themselves, considering

art

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has the power to make the world a better place and motivates both artists and their

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, the Government needs to give artists more incentives, including

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financial

support.

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