many people believe that increasing levels of violence on tv and films is having a direct result on levels of violence in society .to what extent do u agree or disagrree

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The advancement in film industries is alarming since few decades. It is often argued that soaring fighting on screen has a detrimental impact on anger in the community. I plainly disagree with

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notion because, cinema is something else, while reality is a whole different story.

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with, nowadays who is watching movies have high moral and effective understanding that how picture actually made.

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, they are known the way seen is shot and show to the audience.

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, in 2004 the

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a form of entertainment that enacts a story by sound and a sequence of images giving the illusion of continuous movement

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"Robbot" were telecast with a plethora of VFX and animation.

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, it is common sense for individual grasping at things that have shown on the screen.

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, on screen or TV before starting a story they have clearly mentioned in disclaimer that whatever individual seeing is just a story written by writer and there is no intention of violence. Despite

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, censor board

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check a script before it telecast.

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, they don't approve anything that Crete fight in societies.

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, Indian Cinema, Broadcast Act 1996 and Amendment Act 2005, explain that any scene either in

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a movie

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the movie

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or programme that lead to harm for the securities will not be entertained.

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, it is approved by the censor board once they have verified. To conclude, a person can know the background aspects of

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a form of entertainment that enacts a story by sound and a sequence of images giving the illusion of continuous movement

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how it's made and due to close analysis of censor board to the

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make it possible through a specific action or lack of action for something to happen

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many people believe that increasing levels of violence on tv and films is having a direct result on levels of violence in society .to what extent do u agree or disagrree

Your opinion

some people think that money makes a live comfortable while other believe that having a large amount of money brings more trouble do you think advantages of this outweigh disadvantages ?

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

4/The demand for online coaching services and video courses has grown significantly in the digital age. Some now feel this method of learning is a superior option to in-person learning. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

You have had your computer repaired by your local computer supplier. You were extremely impressed with the service. Write a letter to the manager of the shop. Describe what happened when you call the shop. Praised the staff who helped you and ask the manager to thank those concerned.