Your friend has asked you to help him/her to find a music teacher for his/her child. Write a letter to your friend that you have found a suitable teacher. In your letter, you should tell: what experience the teacher has why you think he/she is suitable how to get in touch with the teacher.
Dear Sam,
I hope you and your family doing fine there. In the previous letter, you have told me to search for a trainer to teach
music
to your child. I would like to recommend the famous academy, “Padmavathy music
academy” at Anna Nagar,Chennai.
It offers music
training for students from fundamental to high
level. They have separate staffs for each program and they support students for the Add an article
a high
last
twenty years in this
field. I believe the location is also
not so far from your home. Moreover
Add a comma
,Moreover
i
have enquired Change the capitalization
I
with
the fees and duration of the training it is quite convenient Change preposition
about
to
you as well.
They Change preposition
for
also
offering
online classes according to our leisure time. There is a discount of 20 Change the form of the verb
offer
percentage
if you log in with two courses at a time. I have enclosed their address and contact number below for Replace the word
percent
further
enquires
on Correct your spelling
enquiries
this
. Padmavathy music
academy, No.45 Anna Nagar, Second
Main Road,Chennai. Contact no : 044-2332645
See you sometime
With regardsSubmitted by Karthick Raja on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite