The continued rise in the world's population is the great problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the cause of this continue rise?Do you agree that is the great problem faced by humanity
over
the past few decades, there has been a significant increase in the amount of population around the world. There is not doubt that Suggestion
Over
this
has been caused by meddical
technology advanced and aging relating to the study or practice of medicine
medical
society
. Therefore
, In my opinion, humanity is the hugest
issue that human being need to be Suggestion
the huge
deal
with.
One of the main causes Suggestion
dealt
for
the risen in the levels of population has been Suggestion
of
medical
and treatment development. Suggestion
medically
medicated
For instance
, in the past, people who suffered from plague, there was no medication and vaccination be invented so they couldn't get treatment immedialy
. without delay or hesitation; with no time intervening
immediately
Nowadays
Accept comma addition
Nowadays, however
however
, vaccination is gevien
compulsory and acknowledged as a supposition
given
giving
therefore
some of disease
can be prevented. Suggestion
the disease
Consequently
, people can have longer
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long
expentency
and have Suggestion
expected
expectancy
better environment
to dwell. Suggestion
a better environment
Furthermore
, many people have higher education than before, so they have have
the concept of contraception. According Taiwan research showed that the amount of total fertility rate in Taiwan has dropped rapidly from 4.0 to 1.218 which is the lowest in the world over the past 50 years. have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense
have
In other words
, people hvae
have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense
have
gain
knowledge of contraception and tend to have less children at Suggestion
gained
present time
.
Suggestion
the present time
Nerverthelss
, Suggestion
Nevertheless
althought
overpopulation has been a major concern, I am even though, in spite of the fact that
although
conviunced
that humanity would be the great persuaded of; very sure
convinced
convince
promble
in the a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problem
society
as a whole. A case in a point, thanks to medical improvement, people have longer life and therefore
leading to aging society
in many parts of the world. Subsequently
, they are less likelt
to be cared and supported. Another contributing factor is inequality, has a good chance of being the case or of coming about
likely
For instance
, citizens who live in undeveloping
countries ,
they are unable to afford the cost of medical care Accept space
,
also
live in a poor sanitary environment, on the other hand
, wealth
countries have better medical resources.
In conclusion, I totally agree that overpopulation can lead to many Suggestion
wealthy
wealthier
nagative
impact on the characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
society
which is the great issue interms
of human nature. Suggestion
in terms
Therefore
, government
should introduce related legislation and provide welfare, Suggestion
the government
this
phenomenon can be alleviated.Submitted by vivishen1234 on
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