The continued rise in the world's population is the great problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the cause of this continue rise?Do you agree that is the great problem faced by humanity

over

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Over

the past few decades, there has been a significant increase in the amount of population around the world. There is not doubt that

this

has been caused by

meddical

relating to the study or practice of medicine

medical

technology advanced and aging

society

.

Therefore

, In my opinion, humanity is

the hugest

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the huge

issue that human being need to be

deal

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dealt

with. One of the main causes

for

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of

the risen in the levels of population has been

medical

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medically

medicated

and treatment development.

For instance

, in the past, people who suffered from plague, there was no medication and vaccination be invented so they couldn't get treatment

immedialy

without delay or hesitation; with no time intervening

immediately

.

Nowadays

Accept comma addition

Nowadays, however

however

, vaccination is

gevien

acknowledged as a supposition

given

giving

compulsory and

therefore

some of

disease

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the disease

can be prevented.

Consequently

, people can have

longer

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long

expentency

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expected

expectancy

and have

better environment

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a better environment

to dwell.

Furthermore

, many people have higher education than before, so they

have have

have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense

have

the concept of contraception. According Taiwan research showed that the amount of total fertility rate in Taiwan has dropped rapidly from 4.0 to 1.218 which is the lowest in the world over the past 50 years.

In other words

, people

hvae

have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense

have

gain

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gained

knowledge of contraception and tend to have less children at

present time

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the present time

.

Nerverthelss

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Nevertheless

,

althought

even though, in spite of the fact that

although

overpopulation has been a major concern, I am

conviunced

persuaded of; very sure

convinced

convince

that humanity would be the great

promble

a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved

problem

in the

society

as a whole. A case in a point, thanks to medical improvement, people have longer life and

therefore

leading to aging

society

in many parts of the world.

Subsequently

, they are less

likelt

has a good chance of being the case or of coming about

likely

to be cared and supported. Another contributing factor is inequality,

For instance

, citizens who live in

undeveloping

countries

,

Accept space

,

they are unable to afford the cost of medical care

also

live in a poor sanitary environment,

on the other hand

,

wealth

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wealthy

wealthier

countries have better medical resources. In conclusion, I totally agree that overpopulation can lead to many

nagative

characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features

negative

impact on the

society

which is the great issue

interms

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in terms

of human nature.

Therefore

,

government

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the government

should introduce related legislation and provide welfare,

this

phenomenon can be alleviated.