The continued rise in the world's population is the great problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the cause of this continue rise?Do you agree that is the great problem faced by humanity

over
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Over
the past few decades, there has been a significant increase in the amount of population around the world. There is not doubt that
this
has been caused by
meddical
relating to the study or practice of medicine
medical
technology advanced and aging
society
.
Therefore
, In my opinion, humanity is
the hugest
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the huge
issue that human being need to be
deal
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dealt
with. One of the main causes
for
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of
the risen in the levels of population has been
medical
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medically
medicated
and treatment development.
For instance
, in the past, people who suffered from plague, there was no medication and vaccination be invented so they couldn't get treatment
immedialy
without delay or hesitation; with no time intervening
immediately
.
Nowadays
Accept comma addition
Nowadays, however
however
, vaccination is
gevien
acknowledged as a supposition
given
giving
compulsory and
therefore
some of
disease
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the disease
can be prevented.
Consequently
, people can have
longer
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long
expentency
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expected
expectancy
and have
better environment
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a better environment
to dwell.
Furthermore
, many people have higher education than before, so they
have have
have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense
have
the concept of contraception. According Taiwan research showed that the amount of total fertility rate in Taiwan has dropped rapidly from 4.0 to 1.218 which is the lowest in the world over the past 50 years.
In other words
, people
hvae
have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense
have
gain
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gained
knowledge of contraception and tend to have less children at
present time
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the present time
.
Nerverthelss
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Nevertheless
,
althought
even though, in spite of the fact that
although
overpopulation has been a major concern, I am
conviunced
persuaded of; very sure
convinced
convince
that humanity would be the great
promble
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problem
in the
society
as a whole. A case in a point, thanks to medical improvement, people have longer life and
therefore
leading to aging
society
in many parts of the world.
Subsequently
, they are less
likelt
has a good chance of being the case or of coming about
likely
to be cared and supported. Another contributing factor is inequality,
For instance
, citizens who live in
undeveloping
countries
,
Accept space
,
they are unable to afford the cost of medical care
also
live in a poor sanitary environment,
on the other hand
,
wealth
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wealthy
wealthier
countries have better medical resources. In conclusion, I totally agree that overpopulation can lead to many
nagative
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
impact on the
society
which is the great issue
interms
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in terms
of human nature.
Therefore
,
government
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the government
should introduce related legislation and provide welfare,
this
phenomenon can be alleviated.
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