Some believe that it is beneficial to show foreign films while others feel his can have a negative impact on local culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

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Many people feel that international movies should be streamed as it opens the window for communication whilst some think that it can lead to
unfavorable affect
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an unfavourable effect
unfavourable affect
unfavourable effect
unfavorable effect
on the
culture
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and tradition of the people as they believe that westernization would uproot their roots and civilization. In my opinion, even though, there would be apprehension among the people, it would widen people’s perspective and provides a platform for international exchange of beliefs and ideas. Those who believe that international movies are advantageous focus on
the wider
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the widest
the wide
range of prospects. Having these international movies shown, would allow people to peep into
other’s
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the other’s culture
culture
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and language,
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, it would be beneficial for
country’s economy
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the country’s economy
a country’s economy
. To illustrate, a movie named’ fast and furious’ was released all over the world which gave insight not only about the technology used by foreign
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movie makers
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about their clothing and lifestyle. Apart from that, it gave monetary gains to the country and
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stabilizes the economy.
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, there is a segment, who believe that showing foreign movies have
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a downside
downsides
too, as people are intrigued by western
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and tend to
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their own.
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, it has been seen that people are converting their religions to Christianity and changing their lifestyles. To illustrate, in many developing countries,
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as Asian countries, people are following the western trend by imitating the foreign language and clothing style. One recent remarkable change has been seen in celebrating foreign festivals
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as Valentine’s day and Christmas day in underdeveloped nations. To conclude,
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, bringing foreign movies into one’s own
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give
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gives
manifold benefits, people still believe that it can lead to disregard for one’s own values and
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.
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, I believe that international movies should be shown globally, to share ideas globally and a better understanding of other nations.
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