why do people follow the trends and social standards?

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II.INTRODUCTION A science fiction
novel
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written by Philip K. Dick with the title Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep has thousands of lessons for its readers. The
novel
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talks about the human nature. The story underlines several matters that people may face in their
life
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which reflects on how human lives their
life
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in the future. Starting from people’s dependency to the technologies, the influence of
mass
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media, false religion,
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consumerism
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, less empathy, false identity, mind control, and many more. When I read the
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, I noted that
Deckard
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, the main character in the
novel
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is living with the
idea
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of
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consumerism
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whereby he has an
envy
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feeling for the other people who can afford exotic animals. In the
book
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, people use the real animal to raise their social rank. They buy fancy things even though they do not really need it.
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Consumerism
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is the talking point in the
novel
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that will be discussed in
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paper along with the main character in the
novel
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, Rick
Deckard
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, a bounty hunter who wants to kill the nexus-6 in
order
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to buy real sheep to impress his neighbours.
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Consumerism
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refers to the
idea
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of purchasing goods which is always increasing and it makes people being obsessive about it and feels that their well-being and happiness depends on the obtaining those goods, specially fancy things. In relation, their thoughts
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are
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the influence
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of
the
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media through the advertisement that
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, the meaning of
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consumerism
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in the
novel
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is
also
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related to the sense of
envy
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within the
community
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in real
life
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. Normally, self-esteem, prestige, and
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life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
are the internal factors that lead someone to
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consumerism
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and
competition
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. Rick
Deckard
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represents the
idea
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of
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consumerism
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that categorize into
life
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standard in the humanity described in the
book
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whereby Rick
Deckard
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is obsessed to
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consumerism
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, in
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case
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to buy real animal as by having a real animal is confirming that his social rank is high according to the living standard that exists in that
society
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(Dick, 1968, p. 5). In Indonesia, social
competition
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among the people happens. The
society
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is competing to afford luxuries
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as branded goods to increase their social ranks. The worst
case
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is about those who are willing to do anything in
order
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to achieve their goals which includes to lift their social
status
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. The writer found that the subject
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consumerism
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and social
competition
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is interesting because it reflects to the lifestyle of the people living in the modern
society
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. Rick
Deckard
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and
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consumerism
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in the
book
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showing something similar on how
society
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lives nowadays.
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, the question is about what is wrong with our
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nowadays, Why
society
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should care about the luxury goods and social
competition
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?. In real
life
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, due to the
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consumerism
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, many people are competing to evaluate their social
status
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by buying fancy things.
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, the latest release of branded
bag
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, clothes, exotic animals, and many more.
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shows that people follow the
community
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standard, and using the
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luxury
goods and exotic animals to confirm their social degree. II.FINDINGS Rick
Deckard
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in the
book
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represents the
idea
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of
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consumerism
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. The evidences of Rick
Deckard
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and
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Consumerism
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can be seen in several chapters of the Philip K. Dick’s
book
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. In the
chapter
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one
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of Philip's work, it is written that Rick
Deckard
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in the morning thinks to afford a real sheep to replace the fake
one
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that they have (Dick, 1968, p. 3). According to Philip Dick, “"Ever thought of selling your horse?" Rick asked. He wished to god he had a horse, in fact any animal. Owning and maintaining a fraud had a way of gradually demoralizing
one
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. And yet from a social standpoint, it had to be done,”(5). In here, it shows that
Deckard
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is being envied to his neighbour’s real animal, and he wants to buy the real animal as same as the
one
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belongs to Bill Barbour as the
society
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will be amazed.
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, starting from
chapter
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four until twenty two, in some part of the
chapter
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always mentions having a real and an exotic animal is a centre point of Rick
Deckard
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. As Rick
Deckard
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had completed his mission as a bounty hunter,
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he went to the animal store to afford the real animal, a luxurious goat animal which confirms that buying the correct things is the only way for
Deckard
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to be happy even though he does not really need it. It can be noted on
chapter
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fifteen of the
novel
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whereas Philip Dick, “I own an animal now, he said to himself. A living animal, not electric.” (Dick, 1968, p. 75).
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,
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consumerism
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and social rivalry can be found in Indonesian
Society
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mainly the celebrities and socialite groups in Indonesia. Many of the them value more the expensive items, having
envy
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feeling and brag their belongings to the others, which in
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leads to
competition
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between them. Competing to buy branded goods, luxurious car, exotic pets.
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is reflected in the
idea
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of
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Consumerism
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.
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, the majority of them are pleased to do anything to accomplish their dreams, including taking risks. In fact, there is a lot of proof that denotes to the existence of
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consumerism
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and social
competition
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within the circle of Indonesian
community
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as well as the elite groups. The
first
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evidence comes from
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of Indonesian singer who admitted on an interview session that she previously bought a branded
bag
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just because to preserve her
classy
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class
status
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as her surroundings told her to do so (Ari Lasso TV, 2020). Many of Indonesian
community
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obsessed with hunting the exotic animals (Emerson, 2018). It is proven by how the celebrities and elite exhibit their exotic animals on social media and TV (Detik, 2011). Those pets include Savannah Cat, Sphynx cat, tiger, and many more (Pasha, 2019). On the other side, there are
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some people who willing to take risks just for the
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consumerism
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and social
status
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. It is demonstrated by several cases.
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,
case
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of Indonesia socialite who stole a Louis Vuitton handbag in Melbourne, Australia (Beers, 2020). Another
case
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comes from the issue of prostitutions that often occurred.
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, a teenager that stole a laptop (Liputan 6, 2018). People nowadays and
society
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described in the Philip’s
book
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and nowadays try to follow the standard and trends created in their surroundings. The previous statement raised a question, “why do people should care about it?”. Perhaps they are lack of self-esteem and confidence which make them afraid to be not accepted by the
society
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Therefore they
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Therefore, they
follow the trends and standards. III. DISCUSSIONS The evidences of the manual Do Android Dream of Electric Sheep?
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Indonesian news provided in the findings section has its correlations. The evidences lead to hypothesis that people nowadays and
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described in the Philip’s
book
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use luxurious animals and goods to measure their social ranks.
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Therefore they
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compete and willing to do anything for it, even families.
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, the question is why they should do it?. In the
novel
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, Rick
Deckard
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’s behaviours confirms that he is selfish and greedy for animals with expensive price just to impress his neighbours.
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, he killed the Nexus-6 androids in
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to afford a real animal. It is clearly indicated that Rick
Deckard
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does not care how can he afford his desirable pet, what matter is to buy it as form the social standpoint it has to be done. It means that Rick
Deckard
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indeed attempts to follow the standards in his
society
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. Over here in Indonesia we can see the same points as written in the Philip Dick’s
book
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, it is about the
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consumerism
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and
competition
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in the
community
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. There is considerable celebrities, socialites and elites who have a desire of owning fancy things and exotic pets (Pasha, 2019).
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is proven by the news and references provided in the finding session whereby there is a trend and social standard created among them to possess luxurious stuff and pets.
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, Marion Jola, singer who recognized that she ever bought a branded
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because of her sense of prestige as there is a
community
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standard of owning luxurious things from her surroundings. The other
one
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is a socialite who stole a Luis Vuitton handbag as her surroundings have branded
bag
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as the social standard (Beers, 2020).
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, the trend of owning an exotic pet within the celebrities and elite groups. It can be noted from the YouTube channel of several celebrities.
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,
mass
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media and the YouTube channel that exhibit Irfan Hakim’s exotic pet, Aldabra tortoise, Alshad Ahmad’s Bengal tiger, Raditya Dika’s Sphynx cat, and so much more (Pasha, 2019).
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asserts the correlation between the concept of
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consumerism
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in the
book
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and Indonesian
society
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whereby people’s
envy
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feeling and prestige resulted them to follow the trends and social standards in
order
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to their social ranks even though in fact they do not really need it. In conclusion, people's lifestyle nowadays is extremely
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influenced
by the
mass
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media, trends and social standard. Many of their lives with the
idea
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of
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consumerism
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as they have an
envy
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feeling towards the others. They are obsessing of fancy things and exotic animals, they will not feel good if they did not have it and it is hard for them to be satisfied with all that they have.
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show how greedy people are just to impress the public.
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