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living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

#country #language
Nowadays, due to globalization, move to the developed country
such
 as the United states and Canada is in vogue. Each country has its own
language
 and it somehow a difficult for any immigrant to learn a new
language
 in the early days. While, I believe that, learning any
language
 is not a big deal. Anybody can learn it with very less effort. I partially agree with
this
 notion and reasons for my inclination are articulated in the ensuing paragraphs. To start with, when a person immigrates to a country, he is likely to face a multitude of issues both personal as well as professional level. Due to less foreign accent proficiency,
first
 of all, they do not to express effectively, which becomes a main obstacle to make friends and be socialized.
Moreover
, sometimes less foreign wording expertise leads to depression a person to work, as do shopping, buy household items along with asking for directions are a bit challenging.
However
, none of
this
 will cause a severe issue and one can overcome
language
 difficulties with few continuous efforts within a short duration.
Furthermore
, some people believe that, the foreign communication can affect badly on the professional front. For an example, it is hard for the employee to take and give a set of proper instructions as well as to adopt foreign culture.
In contrast
, If you know the English, which is the international
language
, you can easily come out of any arduous situations. If you do not comfortable with any of the
language
 except mother tongue,
then
 it is fact that, foreign
language
 can be adopted easily if you live in the foreign environment round the clock.
In other words
, if we hear the new
language
 regularly, your brain can automatically pick it up. To recapitulate,
Although
 the foreign
language
 is difficult and cause many problems in different aspects of life, it is for a short period of time and not complicated to learn the foreign
language
 if one will get the environment.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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