Some people think that it is fine for professional sportsmen and sportswomen to misbehave on or off the field,as long as they are playing well.Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is thought that conducting maltreat for professional athletes is not bad. I strongly disagree with

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statement because of a variety of negative impacts.In order to draw an appropriate conclusion

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the statement need to bed properly discussed. There is no room for doubt that everybody considers the professional players as their ideal. All the people from children to older follow them as their ideal man in life.Parents

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undoubtedly let their children follow athletes believing that as sportsmen are successful in life

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it is good to follow them.

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why the school teachers

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do not keep restriction to play games in school.To cite an example

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children

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in school

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playscricket

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play cricket

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or football following popular players

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Messy or Ronaldo

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Sakib Al Hasan or Smith.It means that they practice experiencing their matches and manners as well.

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it is not good to misconduct during the match as the games are broadcasted in television channels.

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it is universally accepted that viewers do not like maltreatment whoever he or she is

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he or she plays

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No spectators do not deserve misbehave while playing game

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of enjoying an outstanding match.

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the authors of the popular events tend to make legislation for the players not to misconduct during the match so that the they can perform an exciting game.It is proved that no one officially or

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unofficially accepts

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things. To round off, it can be said discussing the above statement people the sportsmen as good human with presenting tremendous game. If athletes misconduct on or off the field

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they can loss their popularity.

Md Sayed HussenWed Jul 22 2020

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

253 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

misbehave
professional sportsmen
role model
public figures
influence
performance
moral standards
media scrutiny
endorsements
personal brand
consistency
punishment
redemption
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Some people think that it is fine for professional sportsmen and sportswomen to misbehave on or off the field,as long as they are playing well.Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Include an introduction and conclusion

The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what are the possible solutions?

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The advantages provided by English as a global language will continue to outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree with this statement

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?