between live in the past and present which one you prefer?

when
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When
choosing where to
live there
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live, there
are many options some ppl prefer to live in the past while the other
perfer
an entertainer who performs a dramatic or musical work for an audience
performer
periphery
present. But if I were
to chooses
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chosen
, I would pick living in the present due to the specific reason
belows
in a position lower than
below
. *
first
,
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,
it safe I mean the people in the past was so
cruel they
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cruel, they
will kill you just because of a small problem and there no justices plus live in
present
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the present
there no nuclear weapons or wars it does has
awar
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a war
,
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,
but it doesn't have a many war is going to
occurre
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occur re
(
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(
happen)
next
and
also
depends on where you live as well. *
second
,
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,
it has
electricity let
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electricity, let
compared to the past back
then
there are no electronic no lamp no light it
did it
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did, it
has
light
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a light
or lamp but only ppl can afford that stuff get it.
you
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You
did everything by your hand. But These
day
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days
it
also
has technology
too which
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too, which
to which
you can
used
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use
it.
Such
as for work or communicate
.
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.
Back to The past the past was laid back and slower placed meanwhile, the present is always bustling with activity day and night plus there are many opportunities in the present that the past doesn't
such
as peace, technology,
afancy
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a fancy
restaurant or proper job. *fianally, the present is diversity
,
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,
convenience and excitement the present
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
mean these
day
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days
offer you
alife
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a life
style which will
tech
impart skills or knowledge to
teach
you
anew
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a new
thing
,
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,
allow you to meet
anew
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a new
and interesting ppl
.
Accept space
.
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