In many places new homes are needed but the only place available for building them in the countryside .some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What’s ur opinion about this ?

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new homes are highly in demand in the several communities

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however only

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outskirts are vacant enough to accommodate new constructions and

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few people believe that countryside’s needs to be protected rather than make new homes or buildings.I clearly endorse

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viewpoint due to the damage already occurred in the environment by the human interference. Fundamentally

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the human population has grown by the leaps and the bounds.

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the needs of people are

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exponentially increased

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henceforth

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human race exploiting the

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and has had detrimental effects which are deteriorates the balance of ecosystem and

nature

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intact.If people are persisting

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tendency would worsen the situation,

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the government and the people should put the best foot forward to mitigate

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menace.

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, developed countries like USA and UK have rigid rules for building constructions, which have predominantly protected the

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preserves.

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if people started to occupy the countrysides

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it will affect the indigenous

biome

rigid connective tissue that makes up the skeleton of vertebrates

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where many micro living organisms only could thrive in less human populated spheres.

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, it is vital to to protect the inhabitant of flora and fauna.Since

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the human influx to more and more land area extensively damage environment and global warming is one of the dire consequences of it.

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many animals and plants are on the brim of extinction due to the human extensive misconduct. Suffice to say,

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people need more homes since population flourished

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occupying countryside would not be a solution for

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due to the severe damage humans already made to the

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and we have yet to know that what is stored for the future in the unfathomable turn of time.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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259 words

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In many places new homes are needed but the only place available for building them in the countryside .some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What’s ur opinion about this ?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems. To what extand do you agree or disagree with this statemant?

Individual greed and selfishness have been the basis of modern society. Some people think that we must return to older more traditional values such as respect for the local community in order to create a better world to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recent advances in air travel have focused only on those sitting in upper class and have left other passengers with no benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and that having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.