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Some believe that people are naturally born as leaders while others feel that leadership skills can develop. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#believe #people #leaders #leadership #skills
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Although
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 some people believe that excellent leaders are born and do not make
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all, over
 time, others claim that
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ability
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 can get though obtaining the experience or the skill. In my opinion, I consider that a good leader is a combination of both received abilities and practical experiences
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 of all, many people consider that
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 can be learned in different age and I agree.
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 means that practical experience can get as a young age as at an older age
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 why each person can improve their
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 skills.
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, people who gain new
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 can use their skills in work or their business. Without
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 skills, many people cannot how to improve their life or their country because they do not have special skills for changing other minds.
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, many people can decide to evolving hard problems in different works or business situations.
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, people think that leaders must get to skills
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, a child who was born has
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natural leadership abilities
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ability
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such
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 as energy and optimism which help in problem solving.
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, each Russian kinder garden has several leaders in
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the special children's group, that
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a special children's group that
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 why they show their
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 with childhood.
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, people who have excellent
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skills be
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skills, be
 able to change our mind and situation. In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions, I think that
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ability
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 can get people with new experience and practical skills.
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