Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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People have contrasting

views whether

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views, whether

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the advertisement

an advertisement

is useful to motivate viewers to purchase goods or it is just a normal thing to them. In my opinion, it can be a strong device to allure consumers, if they are presented in

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effective manner;

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essay will discuss both views. On the one hand, advertisement passively hypnotise buyers to purchase. Usually, these are shown

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the public platform

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as television, newspaper or

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the blogs of

internet

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the internet

, with explaining the features of the items.

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, commercials are acted with glamourous celebrities, and incorporated with attractive sound and graphics.

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, whenever the viewers see these often in various media, they create a superficial demand in their mind to have the product.

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promotional activity allure people to spend their money by shopping.

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, adverts of fairness cream easily grasp the attention of young girls as they are certainly promoted by actresses, who have aesthetic beauty; females feel keen to have

such

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cosmetics with the faith that they will

also

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get that

prettyness

the quality of being appealing in a delicate or graceful way (of a girl or young woman)

prettiness

pettiness

pretties

after using these.

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promotional activity might seem ineffective due to the huge availability. These days, ads are attached in almost

everywhere

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everywhere, such

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as, in the media broadcastings or in the social networking sites.

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, many users feel almost no interest and sometimes get

disturb

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disturbed

about these;

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of watching it, they just simply ignore, change the channel or click the stop button.

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, the promoters are

unabled

(usually followed by 'to') not having the necessary means or skill or know-how

unable

to send their message to the target markets by

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way.

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, in several

Youtube

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YouTube

videos,

netizens

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are forced to see ads of items in some interval of the broadcastings, but most of the viewers pause or push shut option and return to the main videos. In conclusion,

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the plenty of presence has made the advertisement less attractive way to reach

target market

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the target market

, I believe if they are designed creatively and broadcast in the right place, these could be the most

significat

important in effect or meaning

significant

device to seduce anyone to consume a good.

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Topic Vocabulary:

persuade
promote
attract
influence
impact
consumerism
commercialism
market
product
brand
endorsement
manipulative
saturated
overwhelmed
repetitive
distracting
irrelevant
exaggerated
misleading
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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The percentage of overweight children in westrn society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years.

To what extent do you agree that the men and women should do the same job as each other.