Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have contrasting
views whether
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views, whether
advertisement
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the advertisement
an advertisement
is useful to motivate viewers to purchase goods or it is just a normal thing to them. In my opinion, it can be a strong device to allure consumers, if they are presented in
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an
effective manner;
however
,
this
essay will discuss both views. On the one hand, advertisement passively hypnotise buyers to purchase. Usually, these are shown
in
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on
the public platform
such
as television, newspaper or
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on
the blogs of
internet
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the internet
, with explaining the features of the items.
Besides
, commercials are acted with glamourous celebrities, and incorporated with attractive sound and graphics.
Therefore
, whenever the viewers see these often in various media, they create a superficial demand in their mind to have the product.
Thus
,
this
promotional activity allure people to spend their money by shopping.
For instance
, adverts of fairness cream easily grasp the attention of young girls as they are certainly promoted by actresses, who have aesthetic beauty; females feel keen to have
such
cosmetics with the faith that they will
also
get that
prettyness
the quality of being appealing in a delicate or graceful way (of a girl or young woman)
prettiness
pettiness
pretties
after using these.
Nevertheless
,
this
promotional activity might seem ineffective due to the huge availability. These days, ads are attached in almost
everywhere
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everywhere, such
such
as, in the media broadcastings or in the social networking sites.
Therefore
, many users feel almost no interest and sometimes get
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disturbed
about these;
instead
of watching it, they just simply ignore, change the channel or click the stop button.
As a result
, the promoters are
unabled
(usually followed by 'to') not having the necessary means or skill or know-how
unable
to send their message to the target markets by
this
way.
For example
, in several
Youtube
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YouTube
videos,
netizens
are forced to see ads of items in some interval of the broadcastings, but most of the viewers pause or push shut option and return to the main videos. In conclusion,
although
the plenty of presence has made the advertisement less attractive way to reach
target market
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the target market
, I believe if they are designed creatively and broadcast in the right place, these could be the most
significat
important in effect or meaning
significant
device to seduce anyone to consume a good.
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  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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