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Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays a certain number of people dedicate their
life
Suggestion
lives
 totally to their
work
 and career. Recently, more and more people have been spending a lot of
time
 in the offices doing overtime.
This
 essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of
this
 attitude tendency and provide a logical conclusion.
Firstly
, when people spend too much
time
 at
work
, they neglect other spheres of
life
. Almost every person has a family and relatives, which assist, believe, and motivate us.
However
, the majority of men and women forget about it. Society prefers to
work
 hard, spend
time
 with computers or colleagues, and make a career.
Therefore
, workaholics do not have
time
 for close people.
Moreover
, the divorce rate increases every year, children see their parents only on weekends and elderly parents wait for a phone call.
Therefore
, workaholics do not have
time
 for close people and social
life
.
Secondly
, long working hours influence human health.
For example
, people who
work
 overtime do not have
time
 to exercise, and they often eat fast food, because cooking needs
time
.
Therefore
, they have a problem with obesity. Another problem is the influence on eyesight. More and more young people are wearing glasses as they spend too much
time
 looking at the computer screen or other devices.
On the other hand
, diligence is a real chance for young people to demonstrate their motivation and attitude to the employer. It is especially important after graduating/graduated from university without real working experience.
Additionally
, sometimes people have a deadline,
for example
, finishing a project, which will take them long hours to meet the deadline and complete the task,
however
, it does not have to be permanent and long term. In conclusion, overtime has a negative effect on people’s social
life
 and health, maintaining
work
-
life
 balance is extremely important for men and women. Sometimes people can have long working hours but no more one or two times a month.
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  • gender roles
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