In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?
Selecting a place to live in is a big decision to make. In some parts of the world, people value
for
their own housing because it gives them a sense of achievement rather than renting which could not save money. From my perspective, house ownership is a natural human desire.
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To begin
with, many individuals seek to own their personal house where they could
live with peace of mind. Many people have a tendency to have their own residence rather than Wrong verb form
can
renting
a place to live, Wrong verb form
rent
although
they may struggle and even face hardships to acquire it. In many Western countries, for instance
, people mortgage and take bank loans for their personal housing. Whereas
, a tenant not only have
to abide Correct subject-verb agreement
has
the
landlord's rules and regulations, but Change preposition
by the
also
they have no privilege to renovate according to
his need. Thus
, it is imperative to owe
a personal house where one can live peacefully without the interventions of Correct your spelling
own
other
.
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others
Nonetheless
, I believe that home ownership has many positive aspects such
as it gives freedom, an individual does
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bind
to any rules and Wrong verb form
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he
has the opportunity to renovate frequently. Taking myself as an example, when I was living in Auburn, Sydney, I Correct pronoun usage
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cannot
even move a sofa set to another room from the drawing room, though personal accommodation is necessary to thrive in a society. Wrong verb form
could not
Furthermore
, the
sense of satisfaction can be felt in own shelter, Correct article usage
a
while
living as a tenant one could not be satisfied because he has to follow strict regulations. So, having personal accommodation will make you feel more relaxed. Hence
, owning a home gives a sense of satisfaction and fulfilment.
To sum up
, a place to live depends on the dwellers either if they live as a tenant or having his
own flat. Correct pronoun usage
their
However
, renting could not save finances while
home ownership can save money in the longer perspective.Submitted by amjad khan on
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