Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

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to the advent of AI, which is expected to foster unprecedented innovations in human’s lives,
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, there is controversy over the impacts of AI on the community. While many people hold the belief that mankind are not ready yet for a world where computers outdo human’s intelligence, I find myself more convinced by that AI’s advancements will better lives in the coming years. On the one hand, AI technology may have unwanted influences on our society.
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, it is believed that there will be a rise in the unemployment rate stemming from the application of AI. People are concerned that the technology would deprive the
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
force of manual works as AI can provide greater productivity as well as lower risk of safety incidents. To cite an example, drivers are facing the threat of redundancy owing to the availability of self-drive automobiles.
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,
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the AI
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over depended
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, children would be lazier and lack of self-care skills as AI helps to do the housework and other chores.
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, it can be disruptive when coming
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as terrorism or information leaking.
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, Zoom – a cloud-based video conferencing service is accused of having 500000 accounts hacked and sold on dark webs and hacker forums, which arouses the fear of privacy invasion.
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, AI does bring about a range of intriguing benefits.
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, human errors can be almost eliminated with the utilization of AI. Basically, AI is just algorithms programmed so it can accomplish missions precisely while human beings are likely to make occasional mistakes.
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, in the field of medicine, there are fatal cases due to surgeon’s faults whilst AI with surgical procedures are capable of a very
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the AI
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plays an important role in various industries.
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, not only has AI made space exploration much easier in practical by running virtual reality simulations of galaxy
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helped in the preparation for natural disasters with exact predictions.
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but not least,
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the AI
is supposed to supersede human to do tedious and repetitive task, which is assumed to be responsible for the increase of unemployment rate. Personally, I think it does not result in
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a higher proportion
higher proportions
of the jobless but create a switch of the workforce from manual works to those that require administration, interpersonal skills and creativity. In short, AI may be a very useful tool for human considered different aspects,
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, there are still downsides
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how we can make use of it. Undoubtedly, we need to be equipped with more skills and experience in order to bring out the best of AI.
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