IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7.5

People will buy a product if it has quality or fulfill their needs. There is no need for advertisement and considered as a form of entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

#people #product #quality #advertisement #form #entertainment
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
In today's time, advertisement of the
quality
Use synonyms
product
Use synonyms
 is much required to sustain any business in the open
market
Use synonyms
.
However
Linking Words
, many people have the opinion that,
Use synonyms
quality
Suggestion
the quality
 of the
product
Use synonyms
 is enough for the person to buy it. I completely disagree with
this
Linking Words
 point of view and I feel commercial plays an essential role to support any
product
Use synonyms
.
To begin
Linking Words
 with,
Firstly
Linking Words
, a good
product
Use synonyms
 without endorsement is like a great company without a business. It is very much essential for any
association
Use synonyms
 to
market
Use synonyms
 its
product
Use synonyms
 positive.
For example
Linking Words
, Maggie is a great
product
Use synonyms
 for nestle
association
Use synonyms
 and we all know that, because Nestle
association
Use synonyms
market
Use synonyms
 it a lot, so the awareness of the commodity can be reached to the people who are looking
product
Use synonyms
 of that segment.
Thus
Linking Words
, marketing of
Use synonyms
product
Suggestion
products
the product
 is most, irrespective of its character, because awareness of the your
product
Use synonyms
 must be reached to maximum people to gain
market
Use synonyms
 share.
Secondly
Linking Words
, In
Linking Words
last decade
Suggestion
the last decade
, endorsement industry is booming like anything! The multinational giants like Google, Facebook, Whatsapp, YouTube run their business and earn their capital form marketing
product
Use synonyms
 and services of different companies.
For instance
Linking Words
, I have a YouTube channel and have a follower of one million people, I regularly get updates from local companies to post their products on my channel and they will pay me a hefty sum for that. These small companies are paid lots of money to me because they know the power of endorsement and they want to gain
market
Use synonyms
 share as much as possible.
Therefore
Linking Words
, marketing of
Use synonyms
product
Suggestion
the product
a product
 is moist and if the stock's
quality
Use synonyms
 is great and it is very much beneficial for the
association
Use synonyms
. To conclude, no matter how many products
quality
Use synonyms
 is good or not, it is very much important to advertise it at regular intervals so that organisations can gain the maximum amount of
market
Use synonyms
 share.
Submitted by jay tank on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: