Some people think that the government should offer financial support and care to elderly, while others think that people should save money for their future life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In

this

day and age,

one

of the most common issues in our modern life is whether or not the

government

should provide financial assistance and take care of the old generation.

Although

it is necessary for individuals to keep

income

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an income

for their retirement time, I personally disagree with the idea that aged people receive nothing from the State. On the

one

hand, those who are in

favor

promote over another

favour

of the

first

opinion suppose that senior residents are worthy of being given

supports

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support

by the

government

, especially the old-age pension or the retirement

one

. The main reason is that when they were young, they used to contribute their efforts by using talent and intellect to create products, which leads to the improvement of the country’s economy.

Additionally

, the homeless and childless elderly

also

ought to be looked after by the authority since they have no

one

else to share a room with.

On the other hand

, aged citizens will be able to enjoy their life if they do not depend totally on others.

In other words

, the more independence they have, the more freedom and comfort they achieve.

For instance

, due to their own earnings, they can travel wherever they want or buy whatever they desire.

Furthermore

, people

also

need to have a responsibility to save money during the working period in order to reduce the financial burden of the

government

. To illustrate, there are various social problems that have to be solved by the administration, especially economic issues. In conclusion, from my point of view,

although

being not only given financial

support but

Accept comma addition

support, but

also

taken care of,

old

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older

people should have

maintain

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maintained

a retirement fund to get a comfortable life and lessen concerns of the

government

.