UIt is no longer necessary to use animals for food, clothing or medical research. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, more people are becoming aware of the harm that the human beings cause of animals and some argue that animals are not necessary to use for food, clothing or medical research. I completely agree with
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as lately,
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, as lately as
many alternatives have been created to stop our dependency in animals.  To some extend, animals are really necessary for human beings. By nature, humans
have get
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have gotten
have got
used to eat animals, since meat from cows, pork and chicken provide a high source of protein and energy.
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, in the ice age, humans spent a big part of their times hunting animals to survive,
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, getting an instinct to eat them. When it comes to medical research, many new discoveries have been
done
produced by a manufacturing process
made
due to the experiments done in animals.At
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, vaccines and drugs are tested on animals which can predict whether it can be used on human beings.
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, our dependency to use animals for certain activities can be dangerous and harmful to some extents. One of the fields which harm more the environment is the agriculture, it uses a big proportion of water to clean the leftover when they kill the animals and many rivers are contaminated with the process. The fashion world is using animal
skin
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to make bags, shoes, belts and so on, which is risky for their species,
htey
people in general
they
can get
extinted
relatively long in duration; tediously protracted
extended
.
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,
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animals
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animal
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still alive when they take their
skin
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. There are many
ilegal
prohibited by law or by official or accepted rules
illegal
legal
activities where the animal under risk of
extition
an exorbitant charge
extortion
extension
are sold for high amount of money.
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, the
cocrodrile
large voracious aquatic reptile having a long snout with massive jaws and sharp teeth and a body covered with bony plates; of sluggish tropical waters
crocodile
skin
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is very famous for expensive bags.
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me
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is unfair and not
neccesary
absolutely essential
necessary
.
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skin
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can be replaced for
sintetic
not of natural origin; prepared or made artificially
synthetic
materials.
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, for medical research, some animals are
exploted
developed or used to greatest advantage
exploited
explored
exported
with long
trainning
activity leading to skilled behavior
training
periods, they receive harmful treatments and they end up dying. Rats are used under poor circumstances and in some cases, scientists made the species mutate. In
conclusion we
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conclusion, we
should delete our bond with animals, it does not bring any advantage for nature and animals should be free.
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