UIt is no longer necessary to use animals for food, clothing or medical research. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, more people are becoming aware of the harm that the human beings cause of animals and some argue that animals are not necessary to use for food, clothing or medical research. I completely agree with

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as lately,

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, as lately as

many alternatives have been created to stop our dependency in animals. To some extend, animals are really necessary for human beings. By nature, humans

have get

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have gotten

have got

used to eat animals, since meat from cows, pork and chicken provide a high source of protein and energy.

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, in the ice age, humans spent a big part of their times hunting animals to survive,

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, getting an instinct to eat them. When it comes to medical research, many new discoveries have been

done

produced by a manufacturing process

made

due to the experiments done in animals.At

first

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, vaccines and drugs are tested on animals which can predict whether it can be used on human beings.

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, our dependency to use animals for certain activities can be dangerous and harmful to some extents. One of the fields which harm more the environment is the agriculture, it uses a big proportion of water to clean the leftover when they kill the animals and many rivers are contaminated with the process. The fashion world is using animal

skin

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to make bags, shoes, belts and so on, which is risky for their species,

htey

people in general

they

can get

extinted

relatively long in duration; tediously protracted

extended

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animals

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animal

are

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still alive when they take their

skin

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. There are many

ilegal

prohibited by law or by official or accepted rules

illegal

legal

activities where the animal under risk of

extition

an exorbitant charge

extortion

extension

are sold for high amount of money.

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, the

cocrodrile

large voracious aquatic reptile having a long snout with massive jaws and sharp teeth and a body covered with bony plates; of sluggish tropical waters

crocodile

skin

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is very famous for expensive bags.

for

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For

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is unfair and not

neccesary

absolutely essential

necessary

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skin

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can be replaced for

sintetic

not of natural origin; prepared or made artificially

synthetic

materials.

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, for medical research, some animals are

exploted

developed or used to greatest advantage

exploited

explored

exported

with long

trainning

activity leading to skilled behavior

training

periods, they receive harmful treatments and they end up dying. Rats are used under poor circumstances and in some cases, scientists made the species mutate. In

conclusion we

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conclusion, we

should delete our bond with animals, it does not bring any advantage for nature and animals should be free.

juansetirado

Jul 23, 2020

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