Many students are taught to push themselves to try and be better than other students, rather than work together for everyone's benefits. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
Nowadays, students are taught to push themselves harder rather than work together for mutual advantages.
Firstly
, this
essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of this
tendency.
On the one hand, the positive side of teaching students to push themselves is that this
is the most effective way to achieve a goal. Children become stronger, independent. They will get good marks in school. They will have a lot of knowledge. In the future, it will lead to an educated generation. For example
, in 2013 in the United Kingdom, group
of scientists took freshmen volunteers from the Oxford university and these students must push themselves more than usual, after 5 years these students graduated with distinction.
Suggestion
a group
the group
On the other hand
, the drawbacks do outweigh the benefits. Body training is the best choice for improving student performance. In the class with mixed-ability students, everyone can learn something new and even the smartest person in this
group
. Also
learn something in a group
more interesting and fun rather than learn alone. In the future, it will lead to cheerful people. For example
, in 2013 in the United Kingdom, group
of scientists Suggestion
a group
the group
also
took freshmen volunteers from the Oxford university, but these students must not push themselves and be an ordinary teenager. After 5 years, students from group
2 was funnier and more interesting like people, while the students from group
1 similar to machine.
In conclusion, studying in a company should be applied for a majority of students. Therefore
, in the future, the world will be less dismalSubmitted by Ragim Azizli on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite