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some people believe that money is the most important factor for achieving happiness. Do you think people can be happy without much money? what other factors contribute towards happiness?

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Some people think that
money
 is one of the most significant reasons for bringing
happiness
. According to my point of view,
however
, rich people can buy any material things that they want, but there are a lot of crucial stuffs that cannot be bought by
money
.
Money
 is one of the most important factors in developing countries and
also
 individuals. It is possible and easy to notice that rich countries developed more quickly than poor ones. Since they have more facilities for improvement and innovation.
Furthermore
, citizens of rich countries live happier and they have an opportunity to live in a healthy and peaceful environment.
Although
, in spite of having less
money
 in low income countries, but some people believe that they can gain
happiness
 by doing some volunteer jobs.
for
Suggestion
For
 instance, Doctors by helping poor peoples and taking less
money
 from them will surely feel
happiness
Suggestion
happy
happier
. Not forgetting that having a good health and
also
 having a supportive and helpful parent and good friends
also
 is one of the most significant and undeniable reason for being happy. Since wealth is useless without having a fully functional body and good health.
moreover
in addition
Moreover
, feeling loneliness which will lead to mental disease
such
 as depression and insomnia. In conclusion,
however
, having a huge amount of
money
 is considered to bring
happiness
 and joy. But in my point of view,
money
 can only buy material things and will give you a chance to enjoy pleasure. But some main precious stuffs
such
 as (love, support, health) cannot be buy it with
money
.
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