Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion
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essay agrees that a high payment for those working as professional sportsmen is fairly earned.
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to actually regularly competing in leagues. It is clear that people who works at jobs which demands special abilities and more works are the ones that deserve to have higher salaries and Use synonyms
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who does meet those demands to be paid with a good deal of money.
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, many disagree and feel that becoming a sports player does not need that much of a hard work as other jobs. Being a professional jock may be seen as not so much a job Linking Words
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essay disagrees that sports professionals' wages should be lowered for Linking Words
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reason as the risks are bigger for them to lose their jobs. Linking Words
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risking their team to lose might easily be fired immediately for that mistake.
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deserving of the payment set for them, some still feel that the wage is too high when there are other jobs that are just as important yet does not receive the same amount of money. Linking Words
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