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Lots of people in around the world don’t tend to recycle as possible as they could. This essay will discuss the main reasons why this had happened and the foremost effect of the problem.

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Environment
Suggestion
The environment
 is an important issue which all people have to take care of it. People should recycle their
rubbish
 and it can be one of the main responsibility. In
this
 essay discussed some reasons why lots of inhabitants will not collect their
rubbish
 and
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
 consequences of
its
the thing named or in question
it
.
This
 is clear that
municipility
Suggestion
a municipality
municipality
the municipality
 or any association which is related to
this
 issue can be efficient in order to
giving
Suggestion
give
 information about
environment
Suggestion
the environment
 and nature where
this
 way can have problems and hurts
to
Suggestion
for
with
 them.
However
, there are some residents who
dose
mature female of mammals of which the male is called 'buck'
does
 not notice about
this
 and it does not matter to them.
Besides
environment
Suggestion
the environment
, even people can expose in
dangerous
Suggestion
danger
.
For instance
, if all
rubbish
 being
toghether
in contact with each other or in proximity
together
altogether
 in a bin, an institute
have
Suggestion
has
 to collect them and it
claimes
assert or affirm strongly; state to be true or existing
claims
claimed
 that hire employee, so struggle with any illness by these people is a hypothesis which can happen more than 50 percent.
In addition
, another reason which can lots of people have had is that they are lazy.
Gathering
Suggestion
A gathering
 of all
youre
of you or yourself
your
you're
 waste together cannot be sensible
desicion
the act of making up your mind about something
decision
 as an example
,
Accept space
,
so governments, teachers, families are playing a key role to give the others a hint.
Environment
Suggestion
The environment
 and Earth are crucial not only for environmentalist
,
Accept space
,
 so all inhabitants have to be eco-friendly and recycle and collect the
rubbish
 definitely do not bring vigorous problems.
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